I'm glad to hear you like it :) I’ve grown rather attached to Daniel.

I appreciate the criticism, I have close to no illusions that I’m good at writing in English (can’t even manage my own language haha). The reason I never ask for a beta is that it make me feel so self-absorbed and intruding, people have better things to do than being my English teacher. But if you feel up for looking it over (or know someone that do) or just feel like pointing out the most annoying errors I’d appreciate it a lot :)