http://zedille.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] zedille.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] solrosan 2011-11-02 09:30 am (UTC)

HI THERE MYCROFT, NICE TO SEE YOU!

I like this ending, it works! Perfect way to introduce Mycroft into the story :D And oh Mycroft, you with your signed texts and your bold text...

"they are taking them" could be better phrased as "they're being taken" - just a heads-up!

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